5.21.2009

Turbulence (Biting Flies test pgs 1-8)

Ladies and gentlemen,

We appear to be experiencing some turbulence. Our journey has been delayed, but rest assured, we will arrive safely at our destination.

In the meantime, please enjoy the in-flight movie.

"Biting Flies: Of Laserdisc, Rocksalt, and Doing Things the Hard Way" is a test story written by yours truly, and masterfully executed by my dear brother, Tim Stewart. Please enjoy, and drop a comment on the blog if you like it. Or if you don't. Just comment.

More db to come, friends. I am truly sorry for the delay. I hope you enjoy "Biting Flies" in the meantime.



Also, if you have any interest in how I write for comics, you can view the script for these pages here as a pdf.

1 comment:

David said...

I think you should use higher quality/larger scans if possible. Also, in the last page I think the speech bubbles should seem to come from the characters in the movie as opposed to the edges of the panels, as if they are the ones talking. It's a cheap, common gag, but I love it every time.